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Letter to my Queen
written by Genocide Reaper04:16 PM 11/16/04| My queen with whom I am obsessed, it might be unhealthy but I feel alive, when by your love I am possed. Turning me to face a direction Iv longed to find, to continue upon this morbid craved ride. Inside and out of the lime light, I am still not a King, but a Demon ridding himself of a haunting shame. I feel paranoid without you around, thinking its all some vile idea, planned out. To decieve me and leave me greiveing, to get inside and tear out my heart bleeding. But I shall not give in to this, I am stronger and more of a Monster than it. I shall continue on my way without a second thought. Because you have become some what distraught. Since it was me you lovingly chose, I shall repay you with love, blood, a soul, and also a rose. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by CrashIntoMe (11-16-2004 - 04:18 PM)
| Good content, but experiment with spacing. Try reading some E.E Cummings. |
by dacode05 (11-16-2004 - 04:31 PM)
| You bring more tears from me than my pain...but they're so good and come so deep from my very heart. I too distrust if you MEAN this...but then you are here and I'm just so thankful that you're voice is in my ear, and it all feels right. How much longer can I bear the breaking of me when you aren't just right here? It scares me the most. |
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