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The Dying Faith
written by maledeth08:17 PM 11/16/04Smoke darkened silhouttes filled in heads of lovestruck fucks to still the moments of loss; deprivation to thee as we uphold pride and commit death to we!
Fragmented hearts are given for the time and daunted parts of faith that loss has reprised this eve.
Our dreams have lessened to the noose in horizons. As the belief is shot on the head once again, never to return in me.
I've commited thyself to your mercy. So weak does it feel to be a puppet, and to be tossed aside,as ragdoll disregard, silhoutted in dust....
Fractioned indulgence shall emit the souls of innocence and tear away the sinew of the bold in decrepit deception!
Now the river runs through crimson as the innocent had weeped and I will off myself tonight in the torture of this self dissection....
I am the silence that creeps in shadows, hidden to demise in sleepless wandering.
To rise in catholicon words of bane, my resting place received by this futile loss of love in me.
I'd dream for she, in summer nights to take away the pain in me, but she has given out cold shoulders, even to the helping hand that held out for thee!
Ecliptic is the dawn that she has handed me in fray.
To demise upon a winter bloom of zeal, in summer gray.
Infectious is the deter of sensation, born upon a goddess rising in affection, handing out dying faith.
I am the forgotten one! The futile wish to she.
Never will her anima come to me, but it did in cruel intentions!
To make me feel again, in vain. And rip out the heart in me..... |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Love is a sad, sad feeling....
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (11-16-2004 - 08:20 PM)
by Acoustic Shadow (11-16-2004 - 10:57 PM)
| I see what you mean about the poems being similar...but yours is more beautifully rendered than mine...excellence again, my friend! |
by chaoticthoughts (11-17-2004 - 02:47 AM)
| This was beautiful. *tear* love....i hate it. wonderful poem |
by dacode05 (11-17-2004 - 06:01 PM)
| you are very talented...enjoyed |
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