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Slit your wrists, from poems like piss.
written by NirvanaGirl2309:54 PM 11/16/04I hide my fears,
and store them away.
As i take my knife,
to my dismay.
My poems are dry,
i want to die.
This poem will make you,
slit your wrists.
Because it is as good as piss. |
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Im sorry. I prolly shouldnt have bothered submitting that....Leave comments though. Critisize the poem. or something?
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (11-16-2004 - 09:57 PM)
by bloodied_lust (11-16-2004 - 10:30 PM)
| I'm going to be honest - It's not good at all - for one thing 'this poem will make you slit your wrists' hmmm... *Im saddened, for I myself self harm and no self harmer should tell others to do it...maybe read mine? \'/ xx \'/ |
by (anonymous) (11-16-2004 - 11:48 PM)
| I don't think it needs to be critisized at all, some people feel exactly that way |
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