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Trigger Finger
written by Mars_Phoenix03:05 PM 11/17/04trigger finger squeeze release breathe
anger hurt emotional rush seethe
abstain pain God watching rath
crying broken shelter children laugh
hollow eye stare needles fly
falling glass rain shatters die
love dance dream kill forever
faith suicide peace lunatic never
silence auidence deafening crowd
maddening honour sound proud
duty father shoot mother
bullet cuts air burns brother
sister heart shadow me. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is weird it just put loads of images into my head.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Acoustic Shadow (11-18-2004 - 10:16 PM)
| Yep...definite imagery there...good job. |
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