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» Poem: BLANAGSATRNU!!!
BLANAGSATRNU!!!
written by i_love_sandy
01:14 AM 11/19/04
shnoogen blakhagastremo
te femodun dedrenestres eh
or sgogoonehmano
demna sandy de roah
don hundos mohos maronses
de amarso unfa grotumne


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
eh. my language leave me alone!

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by Genocide Reaper (11-19-2004 - 05:23 AM)
You are talking about SANDY AGAIN!!!! YOU ARE STARTING TO MAKE ME WANT TO BLOW MY BRAINS OUT YOU CRAZY LITTLE CUNT! He doesn't need to be AGGERVATED! He wants nothing to do with you, yet you bring his name up every so Often..Get a boyfriend.. Forget about him.

by Trapezium (11-19-2004 - 04:50 PM)
It's your own language. YOUR own language. Doesn't it cross your mind that no one's going to know how you feel if you write shit that no one understands. )I bet that was just random shitty words then my name in there. Just to get me fucking curious. Well piss off.

by maledeth (11-20-2004 - 04:26 AM)
Hey...I would like to comment on how good your poem is in my own malefic language....Your fucking poem is shit when it has no meaning. It feels as if the one who killed herself should have and to tell you the truth, it would be much better for all of us. At most, these people in this chatroom say that you were pushed into trying to commit to ravenous actions of righteousness, if not stupidity. Now, I tell you, to grab the razor, the shank, the noose or the fucking pills and commit. Embellish yourself in Bitterness and entomb yourself in suicidal fith, because, in reality, no one wants to read your shit. No one wants to hear your regresssive actions as you stray away from successful vivacity. You choose to live in memory..So Why not become one?! hahahahahaha! So obscene, so decadent.

by dacode05 (11-24-2004 - 05:39 PM)
You won't know when it's coming..and when it does you won't be able to do anything but sniffle little girl snot bubbles..and maybe really delute all the pills you should swallow swallow swallow. (Just saying I agree with these guys. And by the way, you've fucked with MINE now.) *hugs and smiles to you* Do us all with taste a favor, disappear from the site with your worthless shit. You're too much of a little girl to even fake your bullshit right. Even a crazy stalking bitch has more worth than someone so insignificent she sucks at even being a fake. You hold no mistery, no magic, you don't even hold a gift of confusion. I'll be kind enough to offer that you hold the right bottle though...just give me your address and promise to fucking gulp them down. (or just go away, little fly)

by fuzzypunkhat (11-26-2004 - 03:05 AM)
Outdone yourself again? ^.^ I like it, even though I have no idea what it means. You have the guts to submit this stuff. I love ya girl I do. ^.^ U2U me and tell me what it means. And if these people really thought you were a fake little girl they wouldn't be swearing at you. ^.^ Love ya much, good poem. -Skyla

by Morbid Angel (11-30-2004 - 02:32 PM)
Why won't you just dissapear? You just carry on and carry on. You never give up. But it leads you nowhere. You are an attention seeking freak, you claimed you commited suicide then got bored of pretending to be dead, then claimed the doctors bought you back to life. I bet theres not a scar on your fucking arm. Try living life and maybe you'll understand how it really feels. You're just a child, just enjoy your life and keep out of mine and everyone elses. Nobody wants you here. Through deaths veil 'til we have heaven in sight.

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