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Please dont hold me on the floor.
written by NirvanaGirl2306:28 PM 11/19/04the feelings are gone.
and i dont know how to be strong.
I always felt wrong.
WHen i did nothing wrong.
You will be right.
You always were.
But please dont fight.
Dont hold me on the floor. |
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I dont know. I hate life anymore. Leave comments if anyone reads this. i mean ANYONEEE...thanks
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Schizophrenic_broken (11-19-2004 - 06:30 PM)
| it's short and simple. but its good. flow nicly |
by Mars_Phoenix (11-19-2004 - 07:35 PM)
| "anyone will do tonight, anyone will do tonight, close your eyes just settle, settle" - keep writing its good. |
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