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Slice my wrists, like you slice cake..
written by NirvanaGirl2301:26 AM 11/20/04So slice my wrists, like you slice a cake.
Go through the batter break every piece.
Dont take the icing! Dont eat the cake!
Dont ever fail me, or i will awake.
I lost all my icing, now im not a 'cake'
You dont want me, cause im not fresh and baked. |
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Umm. dOnt ask where the inspiration came from? Because i dont know. i just got the idea in my head and wrote it down. But does anyone understand it? leave comments please!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by i*need*help*:) (11-20-2004 - 01:32 AM)
| i think i get it, like ur say the icing is like ur blood or its like ur personality and u've lost i think is wut u saying! |
by hatedandused (11-20-2004 - 07:17 AM)
| Is that suppose to be a metaphor? I hate metaphors...but that's pretty awesome. I get it. |
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