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» Poem: Once Upon a September
Once Upon a September
written by blackened_rose
01:02 AM 11/22/04
Midsummer I’ve waved
With hope for the grave
I begged you appear
With skies fire-paved
And blood red September
Came unto me
Then your face appeared
In roses to see

For all your remembrance
Came like an essence
Full of all your pain
That prison of loneliness
Cry no more
And come close to me
As death soon begins
Soon you will begin to see

For once upon a September
I began to remember
Back in the forests
Of that once known September
Back where we both had a soul
And held or message to see
Where whispers persuaded
The way each of us to be

A rose in the fallen rain
Told all of my unknown pain
So I swore to the razor
I would love you never again
Cold is my soul
Untold is my pain
As I to begin to die
And never to be alive again

I must be dreaming
Please stop screaming
For I am never more
As you keep seeking
Deeper into my soul
So cold am I
And untold is my pain
As I to begin to die

Help me not again
As you soon begin
To reach in my soul
Just like the wicked sin
For I’m broken inside
With no where to go
And no one to confide
My Unforgotten


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I wrote this when I was going threw a really stressful time.PLEASE WRITE DOWN WHAT YOU THINK ABOUT THIS POEM, I WANT TO NO WHAT YOU THINK!!!!!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by SuicideTheMime (2-26-2005 - 04:55 AM)
I think its really deep, I can almost feel ur sadness

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