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Unfrgotten Whispers
written by blackened_rose
01:05 AM 11/22/04
I tried to help her
But she’s to far gone
She’s broken inside
And losing her mind

She can’t find her place
And she’s losing her faith
She’s losing her mind
And left her feelings behind

She’s falling from this place
And losing her grace
To broken inside
With no one to confide

Her soul is lost
And gone with a cost
She is forever alone
With soul as heavy as stone

She’s been rejected
And not respected
Doesn’t no were she belongs
Just to many problems

With no place to go
And a heart of snow
Being lost inside
Only makes her want to die
Her Suicide


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I wrote this the same day that i wrote My forgotten. I don't really no a good title for this one, so if you have any suggestions, they would be very much apreciated. :)PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT ON WHAT YO THINK ABOUT IT. THANKS :)

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