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» Poem: Don't Know Where I Belong
Don't Know Where I Belong
written by blackened_rose
01:06 AM 11/22/04
Don’t no where to hide my eyes
For I’m broken inside
I’m losing my faith
And falling from grace

With no place to go
To dry my eyes
They couldn’t help me
For they couldn’t see

What’s wrong, what’s wrong now?
I want to go home now
I open my eyes
To find the reason, why?

I tell myself to be strong
But everything goes so wrong
I’m losing my mind
And falling even more behind

I’m so lost inside
With no were to hide
I hide my feelings
To get away from everything

Please don’t leave me
For then I can’t see
All your guidance
Is all my escence

I’m sick and weak from this condition
For depression seems like an addiction
I’m always scared
And pain is always bared

Now bared on my tomb
Is the same you will soon
For I’m circled like prey
As I was laid

I see the christening sun
Just as a new life begun
Were whispers persuaded
And never ended

I used to remembered the way
In the newer days
But now I don’t no
And the darkness surrounds me slow

Is it possible,
Or just irrational?
For life to go right
And pain be forever out of sight?

But the more I lay here
The less is my fear
I’m am neither alive
Nor dead to be confide.

So who am I
For I can’t die
Were do I belong?
Where is my problem?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I wrote this poem when i was feeling down. I don't no really were i belong in this world, and i put how i felt into words. PlEaSe CoMmEnT!!! tHaNkS :)

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» Comments / Feedback
by _acceptable_loss_ (12-17-2004 - 03:04 AM)
wow. . .thats really good keep writing

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