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written by i_love_sandy02:51 AM 11/24/04join me with these impressions
and kill till were done
lets go home together
till the war is won
i hope someday i'll shine
on that magazine cover
have a dog and a house
and even a lover
maybe someday you'll join me
i'll hold you till the sun will rise
and maybe we'll be happy
and kill all we dispise |
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meh......alfkaokfjalskfa......yup
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (11-24-2004 - 09:25 AM)
| probably the best poem I've read of yours. |
by Trapezium (11-24-2004 - 09:50 AM)
| Did I mention it's still shit? |
by fuzzypunkhat (11-26-2004 - 03:07 AM)
| Aww sweety. That's great. I love it. Your writing is getting improved and more creative. Don't worry if they don't like it, cause you know I do babe. ^.^ -Skyla |
by mokat1012 (11-28-2004 - 04:48 AM)
by Genocide Reaper (11-30-2004 - 03:59 AM)
| Dear God, now you want to get into the Homicide poetry? Fuck you. Wanna be poet, now wanna be Serial killer. |
by Morbid Angel (11-30-2004 - 02:28 PM)
| Oh dear god...it's a little better but nothing to say you have a talent. |
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