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» Poem: No glow in the casket *for my uncle*
No glow in the casket *for my uncle*
written by NirvanaGirl23
10:29 PM 11/24/04
I am so sick of the disapointments in life anymore.
These stories shouldn't be shows.
Open caskets with no glow.
Make the dead one boring show..

Their faces haunt me.
As the smiles fade.
What once was peaceful,
Turns to hate.

Everyones crying, he lived so short.
He wasn't willing, to ask for help.
We'll never know what was his fault.
But you can't help those, who want no help.

Don't cry for him,
but yet his son.
Only 15, oh so young...
He'll never have, his father...
He LOVED.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Thats for my cousin Gabriel. His dad passed away, pretty much from killing his liver with alcohol. He was really young too. So it sucks. But he gave up the will to live. he wanted to die, i guess :-( Leave comments please.

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by (anonymous) (11-24-2004 - 11:40 PM)
THAT WAS SO SWEET!!!

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