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Unforgiven Sin
written by fuzzypunkhat03:03 PM 11/25/04It was me who disbelieved,
It was me who grieved,
It was me who could not get over my imperfection,
It was me who could simply not see past complection,
Now I can't move, for the death's boundary I've passed and now I'm not so all likely in,
Why, it was just a few mistakes,
Why can't it be forgiven,
It was just... a sin. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by angerblindedheart (11-25-2004 - 03:15 PM)
| i like! i really like it! short but nice, keep writing!!! |
by drowninginmyblood (11-25-2004 - 10:17 PM)
| I like it. Short and simple, but gets the point across.
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