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» Poem: [(Image what you want)]
[(Image what you want)]
written by Open_Until_4Am
07:17 PM 11/25/04
Feeling down.
No ones around to stop me.
I'm my worst enmey.
I'll take every part me that I don't like.
Which is everything.Give me to someone else. Break me down.
I don't wanna live my life.
Hate just being around the thought of you and dying death.
Well, here I go.
Take my last bearth!
Jump into nowhere.
Find that your going somewhere.
Feel unwanted.
But know that he still cares.
Find that life isn't working out.
You need to find away to make it work for you.
Let the bad things come in your life, and take you down.
Wait a monment the good times are still coming back to your town of pain and stress.
Oh no can't handle all of this at once.
Take my last bearth away.
Feel my heart beat is increase.
Watch the blood flow right to my head.
This is what it's like to wanna be dead.
Living the life of me.
Give me something good, maybe I won't........


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Just some more things that always come to my mind now of days. Commnet please I'd like to know if anyone likes it or not.

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» Comments / Feedback
by lostdreamz08 (11-26-2004 - 02:29 AM)
i really liked it...great job

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