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Blood on the Wall(Read, comment)
written by fuzzypunkhat12:47 AM 11/26/04I had it all,
When I could smell you coming home,
The sorrow was following you,
And it stuck to you like the sweet love of me.
Thanksgiving time came,
But still you had your heart hung low,
I tried to cheer you up,
But it was no use.
And the holidayless months swayed by,
Our sweet little home was no longer comforting to you,
For the flowers and candy and stuffed animals weren't enough to lift your spirit,
So you can't say I didn't try.
What's the matter come on and tell me,
You won't say a word now,
You just run off to work in a frenzy,
I feel horrid though.
My love was just suspending from your shoulders now,
And any present I got you, would not be seen by any other,
Because you did not open them,
You just left them under the tree.
The sweet little home we lived in became another old cottage,
Off to work you went and I stayed home,
Just staying in my rocking chair hoping for the luck and happiness to come,
But I guess that wasn't worth it, cause it never came true.
And you stopped eating dinner and coming home late,
Then you wouldn't eat at all,
And if I asked you the only words for the day were,"I ate already."
So I believed you.
But you started losing weight and looking weary,
You never ate anymore and you never smiled,
You never ever hugged me when you got home,
And no words to ever come again.
I left one day to find you a cure,
Searching ever so fiercly,
I was fearing for you,
I hoped you could survive one day of work.
I found it, I found it!
I rushed on home,
Pushed the door open,
You were home early.
You ate with me, I figured you were okay,
So you could wait til tomorrow for your medication,
We talked for a while,
Then we went to sleep.
I woke up from the shot of a gun,
And opened one eye in terror,
To see a horrible sight,
Hopefully I could bear to find this out.
And at his funeral I had lost it all,
I was crazy pretty damn insane,
After I awoke to his dead body,
And the blood on the wall. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
sad poem, and no it isnt something that happened to me.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by GODs_sad_angel005522 (11-26-2004 - 01:08 AM)
| I like it......it shows that not everyone in the world is a fucking happy prep...poems like this make me happy..... thank you |
by lostdreamz08 (11-26-2004 - 01:42 AM)
by AcidBaseHeadInSpace (11-26-2004 - 09:00 PM)
| That's so insanely crazy! I love it in a sad, morose kind of way. it's really a beautiful poem!
_-_Meghan_-_ |
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