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the west night love
written by i_love_sandy05:22 AM 11/26/04were sitting by the sunset
and i am now alive
and cuddle you softly
and throw away my knife
we kiss in the fields
and you hold me in the trees
and we love eachother
i fall to my knees
blood gushes through
this tear in my chest
i say i love you
as the sun sets in the west |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
if u comment bad i will track you down and kill you. that includes you sandy. those tickets to england are for one week and i''m going.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by maledeth (11-26-2004 - 05:31 AM)
| Who in the hell do you refer to? Other than that..I guess it is all right...... |
by Trapezium (11-26-2004 - 08:01 PM)
| Come fucking kill me then, see if I care. You're poetry's getting better but who the fuck's it for? Yourself? |
by utmosthater (11-26-2004 - 08:19 PM)
| Jesus christ you suck. that's all there is to say. |
by fuzzypunkhat (11-27-2004 - 05:40 AM)
| I'm for it Kahno, I like her poetry ^.^ -Skyla |
by i_love_sandy (11-27-2004 - 06:18 PM)
| this poem is for dustin....not the one i liked 2 years ago. the one i love now. i am talkin to him on the phone now. |
by mokat1012 (11-28-2004 - 04:45 AM)
| that was good. very good
bravo! |
by Genocide Reaper (11-30-2004 - 03:48 AM)
| Are you and Dustin monkeys or Birds? Because you are in Trees, and Fields, and shit... So do you two want a banna? Then you two can fuck each other with it. |
by Morbid Angel (11-30-2004 - 02:25 PM)
| HA YOU SUCK COME KILL ME OMGZ SO FUCKING SCARED :'( |
by Trapezium (12-3-2004 - 03:58 PM)
| hah! fucking hell, that's like 8 people since I was apparantly "going out with you". Jesus christ girl-man-thing! Yeah I'll mock jesus christ - the saviour that never existed. I'll mock this poem, too. Hurry up and kill me for god's sake. Opps, done it again, mocked something that doesn't exist. |
by Genocide Reaper (12-3-2004 - 04:29 PM)
| I wonder. If you enjoy making hollow threats and hollow poems. And I like Kahnos knew label for you. "Girl-Man-Thing." |
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