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Tortured Soul
written by trulybroken57
04:14 PM 11/26/04
How can you
Do this to me?
Torture me.
The scars you have
They make me cry
I can barely stand to look at
Or to touch you
It hurts too much
I wish I could show you
How broken I really am
But you have your own
Battle to fight
I'm forgetting everything
How to love,
How to smile
I have no one to talk to
Especially not you
I want to be
Close to you,
A part of you
But I'm too afraid
Of getting in too deep,
Of losing my grip.
I'm all alone,
Even when I'm with you


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
tell me if this makes n e sense

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» Comments / Feedback
by (anonymous) (11-26-2004 - 04:18 PM)
omg i love it! its how i feel right now

by Tortured_Soul (11-26-2004 - 11:17 PM)
It does make sense and i think it is REALLY good. i feel like that too. Maybe we can talk sometime. Email me at tortured_soul_with_no_life@yahoo.com.

by drowninginmyblood (11-26-2004 - 11:46 PM)
Amazing. It's very deep.

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