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Tortured Soul
written by trulybroken5705:10 PM 11/26/04How can you
Do this to me?
Torture me.
The scars you have
They make me cry
I can barely stand to look at
Or to touch you
It hurts too much
I wish I could show you
How broken I really am
But you have your own
Battle to fight
I'm forgetting everything
How to love,
How to smile
I have no one to talk to
Especially not you
I want to be
Close to you,
A part of you
But I'm too afraid
Of getting in too deep,
Of losing my grip.
I'm all alone,
Even when I'm with you |
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tell me if this makes n e sense
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Demonic_Aftermath (11-26-2004 - 06:02 PM)
| I feel your pain. Your poetry makes perfect sense, and even if it didnt, dont fear that you are the only one to hear and understand it, write it anyway. |
by Darkwolfgirl (11-26-2004 - 06:31 PM)
| it doesn't have to make sense. its a great poem. |
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