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Forgotten Suicidal Faces(READ)
written by fuzzypunkhat08:02 PM 11/26/04I've seen so many deaths from young to old,
Now they are back to haunt me again,
I've seen bodies with wrists and nooses lying so cold,
They watch me and talk to me it never comes to an end,
I've let my friends do it but I've tried to make them stop,
Despite what I want and what they would like,
I guess it was weighing down their lives so slowly but I still love them a lot,
I've seen Raelynn go, Stacey go, along with Mike,
I don't know why they did it but they're mad,
Because a lot of people forgot,
They cry their invisable blood always to show how sad,
Some from older times like Catherine and her beautiful chandelier,
I've seen it before her eyes and within them held her fright,
Sometimes I hear her at night after the dripping of her tears,
And in the morning she will fade and all seems right,
I think tomorrow I will go to their graves,
To show them my pity,sorrow, but love,
To show them what I feel,
And how they belong not in the ground but above,
I will watch their family's photos and see how much dust it saves,
And I will stand here but nevermind that I'll kneel,
I'm sorry they forgot you but it's not my fault and you can't blame me,
I'm sorry but I'll miss you too,
Maybe tomorrow I will clean the dust off your photo, and make them see. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by psycopathic_juggalette420 (11-26-2004 - 10:12 PM)
| thats really sad, i cant say i know how much u have gone through, but i have lost a lot of loved ones, but not all from the same reasons, i have tryed to commit suicide, but no i relize people love me and some would be lost without me, but then i think in the back of my head, after a couple months they will get over it, and think of it maybe once a month or so, maybe once every 2 months. |
by bartman (11-26-2004 - 10:13 PM)
| its good i'm sorry you've experienced so much loss. i did like it but i think you might want to find your objective before you write intsead of trying to find it while you write. nevertheless its a somber, moving piece. |
by psycopathic_juggalette420 (11-26-2004 - 10:13 PM)
| thats really sad, i cant say i know how much u have gone through, but i have lost a lot of loved ones, but not all from the same reasons, i have tryed to commit suicide, but no i relize people love me and some would be lost without me, but then i think in the back of my head, after a couple months they will get over it, and think of it maybe once a month or so, maybe once every 2 months. |
by Slipknot_drummer_chick (11-27-2004 - 03:04 AM)
| Hold on, I have gone through many suicides and the best thing to do is to keep your thoughts at bay, dont let them eat you as they have done to me. Believe me, cutting, drinking, smoking, none of it is worth it....stay strong. |
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