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CUTTING
written by Open_Until_4Am04:35 PM 6/12/04Couldn't handle it all on my own..
Understood by so many, but I still feel alone..
Tonight will you care if I'm crying tears of pain, watch my skin slowly tare..
Today it will be just another day in hell, look at the sky as it turns red...
In the next few weeks they'll just be scares...
Never tell just why I'm hurting myself so..
Give me one more chance I'll make you see, that your the reason I'm killing me!!! |
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What goes on inside the head of a cutter
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (6-12-2004 - 04:38 PM)
| You really haven't tryed to commit suicide have you? I have, many times but i didn't feel any kind of link with that poem. Sorry but this one is poor |
by (anonymous) (6-13-2004 - 03:35 AM)
| 1) learn to spell
2) you are full of shit |
by (anonymous) (6-17-2004 - 11:32 PM)
| Yea I know I've cut myself but never to kill myself. This poem is more about what I could get out of tryin to understand a friend who has tried to kill herself..I never really thought that I did a good job at this poem..But she said that it made me realize her pain a little bit more..All I wanted was to understand her..I tried my best thankz for your comments..I'll have more poems to comment on soon maybe...And ok srry for my spelling..This is away of learning to me...Poems and Music is that was of life for me... |
by Devilgrl142008 (6-18-2004 - 12:28 AM)
| I actually liked your poem....I feel the same way....but we should relize that we have atleast someone that cares about us....think about that... :) |
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