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Hit The Wall
written by Morbid Angel10:03 PM 11/28/04I've got the words inside me,
I just can't let them out,
I've got the ideas written already,
Got the titles written down.
I've hit a door that I can't open,
Kinda like the one into your soul,
It's like something got broken,
I've lost something and I've got no flow.
Maybe it's the tears that write,
What the hell am I supposed to do,
Without any in my eyes?
Maybe it's because I have you.
It's because I'm lacking any fatal bleeding,
I've got my problems but I've been worse,
I have the one thing I've always needed,
This writers block is some kind of curse.
My words grew tired and lay down to die,
Maybe it's time to lay down my pen,
Let go of my emotions and all the ties,
Maybe this writing needs to end. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
My poems suck lately, I think I'll stop. I don't know what the point of it is anymore, it doesn't help with anything.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xOBlaCkTeaRz_LP (11-28-2004 - 11:08 PM)
| I totally Agree They Suck And You Tell My poem that it sucks chek before you critisize (Hypocrip) |
by Morbid Angel (11-29-2004 - 07:46 PM)
| lol, the difference is your poems do and always have sucked. you left a comment on my other poem calling me a hypocrite, when really it's you...you said I was emo and stuff but really have you read your own? |
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