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What can I do to Keep us Together?
written by fuzzypunkhat
08:17 AM 11/29/04
It started out like a friendship, I guess,
When I was lost and alone,
I was lacking slowly,
I was socialless.

You guided me through the darkness,
Away from the people,
To show you who I really was,
Into the light forest.

You helped me up when I had fallen,
Held my hand while walking around,
Smiled at everyone else,
You picked me up when I was crawling.

After a night of hugging like our usual day,
You decided to say something,
You wanted to do something different,
Like say play a game.

We played hide and go seek in the woods,
You found me right away and hugged me close,
Whispered in my ear,
And kissed me while you could.

We became boyfriend and girlfriend,
It seemed always you were mine,
We carved our names in eachother's walls,
And hoped we would be together til the end.

But our relationship scattered,
My love,
My hope,
Anything I had left was shattered.

I send you continuing notes,
I wished you would reply,
I felt like a disgrace,
But I was in hope.

I wished it would've stayed forever,
I miss being in your arms,
And your lips so sweetly against mine,
What can I do to keep us together?


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Comment, tell me if you like it please it's my latest and g ood work!

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by XxGothicYamixX (11-29-2004 - 05:20 PM)
i know what that feels like as of last week - let it all out...shit happens

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