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For The Girls (your not her)
written by Mars_Phoenix07:26 PM 11/30/04Spill your words onto a page,
Perfect skin and figure in this age,
And you don't fit in you never will,
Still you try so hard to be until
You can't breathe you can't leave
Behind this person you've become,
And underneath the smile you're so numb,
And you don't see me see you its so dumb,
Look don't you know I see through you?
A scratch on the surface and you falter,
Hide yourself from the mirror your not her,
Inside your the girl in the crowd,
Your so quiet yet your so loud,
So much to say you don't want to obey,
That inner voice that says your not OK. |
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to all the girls who ever felt like this way.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by sexyshorty (11-30-2004 - 07:28 PM)
by darktinkerbell (11-30-2004 - 07:29 PM)
| wow, that's exactly how I feel, and it almost made me cry, I'm speechless cause this is so much like me, it's pretty scary! but thank you, this poem just gave me a new view on life |
by Acoustic Shadow (12-3-2004 - 12:37 AM)
| I've felt that way almost every day of my life... |
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