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» Poem: What You See...What You Get
What You See...What You Get
written by trulybroken57
12:53 AM 12/1/04
Why do you think
You can judge me,
When you don't
Even know
Who I am?
Or what goes on
In this prison cell
I call my mind
If you think,
Even for a second,
That I am the
Happy person that
I seem to be-
You don't really
Know who I am
All my smiles
Are fake,
Guiding you in
The wrong direction
So you will
Never guess
That what you see
Isn't always what
You get


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is for all the idiots who think they know me, like my parents and a few of the people i used to call friends

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» Comments / Feedback
by ECKO_rulez69 (12-1-2004 - 01:37 AM)
thats tru .. it always happens to me and I'm not the person most think I am

by RenagadeAngel (12-1-2004 - 02:26 AM)
Turn that frown upside down, you know I have an X/girl that always used to saywhat you see is what you get, she looked saine but shes a fuckin Loony toon. I must beg to differ on that topic.

by (anonymous) (12-27-2004 - 11:10 PM)
hey i love this poem..it really discribes wut i do..i smile just to make everyone happy but on the inside im screaming in depression.keep doing ur think ur awesome at the poetry thing..KAREN

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