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» Poem: I Loved You Then
I Loved You Then
written by blackened_rose
12:14 AM 12/2/04
Every time we lie awake
After every hit we take
I still can't find the reasons why
I still just let you pass me by
I just can't understand why you
Do all the things that you do
I hate everything about you
Oh I, loved you then

I still lie here every day
Looking at you the same old way
But then I relize it's not you
Because of the things that you now do
The things that you used to fight
Your doing, even though there not right
I hate everything about you
Oh I, love you then

I go were we used to walk
Down the same place were we talked
About all the things you hate
And what will be your fate?
How could you do this to me
For this end was not ment to be
I hate everything about you
I, oh I, love you then

I run away to you
Because I can't be without you
I tried to figure out
What I was always without
But I can see that it's not me
Because you just can't see
The things that you've done to me
Will not begin to leave me be

I hate everythinng about you!
Why do I love you still?
I hate everything about you!
Why do I love you still?

My life is so empty now
And my head is always bowed
I got threw each damn day
I hate going my own way
Life is nothing to me here
And my eyes now produce a tear
I hate everything about you
Oh I, loved you then

Life is going out of wack
Because I still want you back
I don't know what to do
Because I'm just too glued to you
I'm beginging to lose my mind
And falling so far behind

I hate everything about you!
Why do I love you still?
I hate everything about you!
Why do I love you still?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
During one of my really boring college classes, I got a song called I Hate Everything About you be 3 Days Grace stuck in my head. I only remembered alittle bit of the song, and I was getting frusterated, so I wrote my own lyrics to the song. I don't really take that much credit for this poem because not all of it is mine, some of it is from the song I Hate Everything About You. I just thought that maybe you would like to read it.

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