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Iv done so much yet so little
written by Genocide Reaper03:52 PM 12/3/04| Iv done so much, yet I can still do more. Iv done it all, but thats not it. Iv done so much, there must be a bunch, a basket of bread some where I havn't touched. This is the way it is. This is how the message will get sent. I have to much time on my hands, otherwise I wouldn't be considered one of the best here. Just, I don't care. Thats the problem. I just look to far back. I am stuck in one place. So in the mirror at my face, I'll stare. This talent, these words I try to share. Is it enough! I still don't think so! So much more I must do! I want you all to understand me when I speak of these things, I want to hear you say one thing, tell it how it is. Don't mask the taste with sweet lies, take a bite of BITTER TRUTH! Let me hear what you really want to say. Don't take the oppertunity just to throw it away! Iv gone through so much, yet I have so much more to wade through, the swamp of sins, the river of rhymes, Its all the time, I have in the world. To tell you about these things, but it gets me no where, except deeper into quick sand. I cut off my wings. I bound my hands. I sank to the ground, I ripped out my heart, I fell the fuck apart.Yet, I have so much more to say. That Iv seen and done. All of my life seems gone, But I know. There is more to come, so no more will I sit here and listen to the door slam shut. |
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I'm just looking at how many poems Iv written.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (12-3-2004 - 04:00 PM)
| I feel the same. Stop writing poems as soon as there's nothing to write about and not before. Fuck anyone who moans at you for being a "poetwhore" We all know who the excellent poets are on here. It's a pity one of the best left, I wouldn't want anyone else to. Maybe little pathetic people like Alex should go though |
by Genocide Reaper (12-3-2004 - 04:11 PM)
| I hear you loud and clear man. I love reading your poems and Morbid Angels. And of course my Babys xD All so much good anger, and emotions. So much Reality and Brutallity xD |
by xSadisticPhsyc0x (12-3-2004 - 04:49 PM)
| You better keep writing, what else would I do with my spare time -glares- Rock hard \m/ |
by Morbid Angel (12-3-2004 - 05:14 PM)
| Me? Aww I feel the same :)
I wish I could feel like you do. Every time I think of something, I think "Wait...I've probably done this before." And then I go blank. And when I try to write about anything happy, it just sucks. I guess it's better then being one of those annoying poets like Alex who piss everyone off. I wish I had the words that you do, everything you say really gets the message across and you do it so beautifully. |
by Genocide Reaper (12-3-2004 - 07:34 PM)
| *wonders what this is \m/ |
by Morbid Angel (12-3-2004 - 07:43 PM)
| It's little mini moshers who think they're cool because they type the \m/...supposed to look like the rock n' roll sign you make with your fingers. |
by Genocide Reaper (12-3-2004 - 09:54 PM)
| \m/ Hell Yeah. I'm gonna start useing it. *plays some Slayer and head bangs* |
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