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» Poem: Depression's Impact
Depression's Impact
written by trulybroken57
07:36 AM 12/6/04
This never-ending sadness
Is weighing down
Heavily upon my shoulders.
I'm so tired,
Yet I can't sleep,
For these thoughts
Won't leave me be.
I tell everyone to
Leave me alone,
That I can handle it,
But I can't,
I need you
Here with me-
To tell me
That it's okay.
I feel like
I don't deserve you,
But if I
Didn't have you
I would have
No reason to exist.
I wish that
I could smile for you,
And truly mean it.
But that is near impossible,
For this sadness
Just won't lift


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
for tommy bcuz without him i have no reason

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» Comments / Feedback
by 2deo (12-6-2004 - 12:14 PM)
awesome.i love it!! i know EXACTLY wat u mean...keep writting..ur great at it...and ur not alone...remember that...ok?

by silent_screams (12-6-2004 - 02:02 PM)
i totally agree! its great and i cn totally relate 2 wot ur sayin.

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