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» Poem: She's So Pretty
She's So Pretty
written by Morbid Angel
08:58 PM 12/7/04
She's the meaning of pretty, everything I've ever wanted to be. She has the hair, the eyes, the perfect skin, for all that theres so much I would always give. If I was her would I be thinking the same? Would I still find a reason to complain...or would I accept that I was beautiful and shine out like I could, just by being perfect you can own the world. With that smile on her face hiding behind the make up, she doesn't need it there because without it she's pretty enough. I have to hide behind my eyeliner but a tear forces it to smudge, down my cheek so black it runs. It's like a cut across my eye only it hurts deeper inside, my clear tears to me are blood and it stings everytime I cry. She holds out her hand and so many people take it, with one look at her smile their hearts fill with loving. She's so damn pretty and she makes me feel like nothing. To me she is perfect. I'll never see myself as anything more then a monster, tearing my heart out just trying to be her. I'm stuck in my body and I'm trying to escape, then maybe I'll be happy...someday.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I'll never be what I want to be...but thinking about it...is anybody what they want to be? I hate to say it, but I'm just the fucking same as everyone else out there. The only difference is, I have a reason to think these thoughts.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Trapezium (12-8-2004 - 04:31 PM)
Or maybe you're perception is skewed and these thoughts are based entirely onj opinion. You're gorgeous. No one's perfect. So there's no way you can be, you're paretty damn close, though.

by DeadPetalRoses (1-17-2005 - 10:21 PM)
I love your poem , you really described just how i'm feeling . Your poetry is amazing , keep writing please =) x

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