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Friend or foe
written by sarah1008712:00 PM 12/10/04You can't be my friend, i love you to much
And as a friend, I shouldn't feel as such
But i have to, its not like i want to
If it were up to me I'd forget about you
But i cant, it's impossible for me,
after you loved and then left me to grieve
So i cried the tears, and wiped my snot
You've kissed me loads and thats your lot
I wont let you in any more, it hurts so me so
How can you be my friend and my foe??
Perhaps its time for you to feel my wrath.
I've tried to be kind, I've tried to laugh
But i have now no other path to take.
Than to put you in pain, put your soul forsake
I never wanted to be such an angry person,
But to me all this love does day by day is worsen.
Tears on the pillow, feet on the floor,
I look in the mirror and ask who wants more
The answer is you, I shall finnish what you start,
the painful wound that you left on my heart
I grab my coat and off i go
How can you be my friend and my foe??
So i have my knife, and a rope at my hand
The grass cruches as i tread on your land
I go to you window, I see you so still.
What I'm about to do now is against your will.
But no, i see lights on the road, its a car
If i try and run i wont get too far
So i wait, til its gone now i am clear.
To do what i want i have no fear
What shall i do, what shall i show
You cannot be my friend and my foe
He hears a tap at his window pain,
Thinks "for the love of god, not the birds again"
And he stirrs in bed to open his eyes
Looks out the window to a lovely suprise
A young girl he once knew
Swaying from where the wind blew
The cuts on her stomach he begins to read
The wounds are fresh they continue to bleed
"Now i'M DEAD, the girl you used to know
You are now neither an enemy nor a foe" |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Still angry bout by bf..........this would be a cool idea but, i dont think id get away with it on his estate!!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by rmcalister1 (12-10-2004 - 12:07 PM)
| that was so very beautiful nice fucking work!... > |
by Morbid Angel (12-12-2004 - 09:15 PM)
| I'm coming to kill you, won't leave until you die mwuahaha |
by sarah10087 (12-13-2004 - 12:39 PM)
| you cant kill an enitity....especially over the internet |
by Trapezium (12-16-2004 - 06:19 PM)
| Ridiculous spellings and typos. " it hurts so me so" - makes no sense whatsoever. My views on your poetry are completely unbiassed. Cassie is actually right, you're anger sounds much more like little-girl-sadness than frustration. |
by sarah10087 (12-16-2004 - 08:31 PM)
| I liked this one and ur veiw is biased...im sure if i bowed down to your mighty crack then you wouldnt have bothard insulting all my works, but hey, water off a ducks back! |
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