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» Poem: Urge To Love You
Urge To Love You
written by Morbid Angel
07:04 PM 12/10/04
So once again you've screwed my head, holding my hand so tightly as we lay on my bed. If you love her so much then why am I in your arms, and if I love him so much then why is he so far? For all I know he's with some other girl. But I can hardly talk with your arms around my waist, I'm thinking he's with her and feeling so betrayed. But with the smell of you on my hands and your body so damn strong, once again I'm here and I've waited for so long. Running my hands down your back I just have the urge to love you, keep squeezing me so tightly like I'm a thread of life to hang onto. When you're not here a single thought doesn't cross my mind, but as soon as I see you I really have to try. She's hurting you so badly and you keep crying to my door, maybe you're drawn to the memory of that one kiss shared before. As soon as you walked out of my door my thoughts escalated into something more. Life became so complicated as my heart started beating in time with yours. Stop my hands from holding you, stop my lips from kissing you, stop my heart from loving you.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Luke. Everytime you step away from me you take away my memories, and with each step back theres something more. You keep stepping.

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» Comments / Feedback
by rmcalister1 (12-10-2004 - 07:09 PM)
that was very beautiful......

by Trapezium (12-10-2004 - 07:29 PM)
Well done Cass. *huggles*

by *FoReVeR*BrOkEn*69* (12-10-2004 - 09:23 PM)
That was awsome, i really liked it. I can totally relate to that when they step in and back out of your life. It like you dont know what to do.. :/

by Darkwolfgirl (12-11-2004 - 02:43 AM)
i know exactly how you feel. i feel the same way with my now b/f. he just steps in when he feels the need to and steps right back out. i just wonder how long it will last this time, but i love him. great poem. ur are a magnificent poet.

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