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TRappED
written by sarah1008705:40 PM 12/11/04Tie me down with the promises you force me to make
Capture me with your sympathy vote, cry for fuck sake.
I once was free, but i still wasnt pleased with it at all
You caught me in a cage like a bird, now i can not fall
But don't you see that the chains should be mine not yours
I am the judge, its my life, its my chance i make the laws.
Dont trap me, Im begging you
Let my fly into the cage of my own accord
Or I'll stick my wing in the cage door and jump.......a bird can't fly with only one wing. |
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Not up to my last poems standards, but its a quick interpretation of how i feel now.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (12-17-2004 - 05:01 PM)
| You're being contradictive again. You say you like your poems to be understandable thus you use short words. Yet you say youlike your poetry to be complicated and ubnderstandable to little few. You say you like being educated, yet your education seems poor. You know little of anarchy and next-to-nothing of poetry, both of the things we've argued about. |
by sarah10087 (12-19-2004 - 01:01 AM)
| Understandable and complicated are two different things. As I have said, if you don't understand you don't deserve the explanation.Complicated, like a puzzle than can be worked out if u have the mind but understandable so it doesnt eliminate those who weren't given the equal opportunity for Education. |
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