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» Poem: Don't tell me you're leavin
Don't tell me you're leavin
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk
08:16 AM 12/12/04
Don't tell me you're leavin,
I know I can't handle it.
I can't let another good thing walk right out,
I can't deal with this shyt.
I fuck everything up, I'm waiting for this conclusion.
I can't see throught this fog when you're not here,
this is all a big confusion.
Like the others I've made loving you was a mistake.
It opened doors, and slammed them in my face.
Don't tell me you're leavin, cause in my mind you'll always stay.
More than before I'll think about you every half second of the day.
Don't tell me you're leavin, im not ready for goodbye.
In my heart you'll always be, always makin me cry.
Don't tell me your leavin, cause then im leavin too.
I'll die knowing I can't be with you.
Don't tell me you're leavin I know what it will bring me too.
I'll kill myself cause of the constant thinking of you.
Don't tell me you're leavin, I can't handle it.
I can't let another good thing walk right out.
I can't deal with this shyt.
Don't tell me you're leavin.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
If he leaves I leave.....like jack and rose. Love is love. Sometimes that's all that matters.

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» Comments / Feedback
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (12-15-2004 - 03:28 AM)
I'd really appreciate it if ya guys could leave some comments...thank ya much. hehe-Cassy

by Cut_Wrist_Risk (12-23-2004 - 07:41 PM)
Kahno- Thankyou so much for what you wrote...it was the nicest thing anyone has ever said to me before. I'm sorry I accidentally deleted it...I would give anything to get it back! :( thanyou so much!

by (anonymous) (1-18-2005 - 04:29 AM)
cass, i already told u on an im but ill just gon' head and say it again, i wish i could fix everything, and make everything okay once more but some things r just out of my hands. just know ill always be here for you! i love you! -mary

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