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OVER ANALYSIS
written by sarah1008704:56 PM 12/12/04Stop it! Your taking it out of control
Analysisng your life away
The Zutons, Oasis, Snow Patrol
Listening to them every day.
Your doing yourself in, your soon to collapse
I cant watch you as you fall
Performing stage tricks so every1 claps
I've gone through this all
Try not to think, block a bit of it out
"So much potential so much to have"
I try and scream, i try and shout
You wont hear, you think I'm bad
Stop thinking! Your throwing it away
Everything you ever wanted Will be yours one day. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Bustedrox300 (12-12-2004 - 05:27 PM)
by mattwhatever (12-12-2004 - 07:29 PM)
| thank you! i no but thats just who i am! I will miss u! |
by Trapezium (12-16-2004 - 06:14 PM)
| Why do you go around criticising people's structure when your "poetry" showcases none of what you speak of. Stanzas are random, linebreaks are random. That doesn't exactly shout out "structure" does it?
Morbid, your just saying that to get back at me. My structure is better than your, damned prose, so you can "have a cup of shut up" (lol, what a sad line you had!
I do believe you've never read any of Cassie's prose. Prose does not rhyme, and does not flow. Cassie's poetry does. Please do yourself a favour and learn what words mean before you use them as insults. It'll only get you laughed at. It's "Have a nice cup of shut the fuck up" anyway. Yeesh, such a talented linguist such as yourself should know how to quote! |
by sarah10087 (12-16-2004 - 08:26 PM)
| "Yeesh!!" We're really in yanky town now arent we! lol. oh, well im sorry!! But its still a sad line!! Even with the word fuck in it (what a rebel). You obviously dont know what structure is all about. Structure shapes meaning, theres not an agenda of how to structure a poem, its up to the author on how to use structure as a tool, to emphasise a point or to symbolise change! |
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