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» Poem: Can't beat us
Can't beat us
written by Genocide Reaper
08:30 PM 12/12/04
This is the poem that finally defeates you, these are the words that will magically bleed you. This is the poison I shall feed you. We are the unstopible critics of your poetic nonsense, we the Bi-product of self made conduct, we are the ones you cannot beat, we are the ones that shall rise above all, we are the elite. I'll fight for the poets I love, you'll die for no reason, just another foolish cunt. I am the ultimate fate for you, Maggot. What can you possibly say, to bother me? You desperate faggot, yes, its you I hate. I can be some what sinical, and yes, fuck you up metaphysical. I am the one you truly fear, because without me, here, theres just two left to fend for theirselves, not saying that wouldn't do a great job, but its me that keeps pumping out these hurtful words. You can't deny, all you can do is lie, I no it grips you, I can already taste those tears. You can't top us, and you'll never stop us. The warriors of eternal dedication, the ones with pure determination, you cannot over come my feelings, you cannot treat me like some child. For my stability in my Beliefs cannot be measured, the sheer fact I find this pure pleasure, is enough to bury you forever. Did you think all of your ignorance could shut me up? Did you whole heartidly believe, all of that pretense was enough to beat me down? And shatter my crown? I can see why you act so pompous, because all you can do is act, its a fact. I'm above you, and I shall be, until the die I day, and beyond. Why don't you just take your sweet time before you respond, make it meaningful, because if you don't I'll just teach you the true meaning of hateful.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Come kids, lets see you say something else that is completly unorthadox and fucking stupid.

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» Comments / Feedback
by arnie (12-12-2004 - 08:30 PM)
fuck, this is boring now.

by woteva_girl0405 (12-12-2004 - 08:35 PM)
dude i aint tryin to beat u. 1 day i want my name up there with yours. ive been writing poetry 4 about a yr and have 1 publshd. try reading mine. purposefully dropped is on there at the moment. im not a big lover of peace or anything cos i love violence but what the hell is up with all this fighting?!?

by Morbid Angel (12-12-2004 - 08:36 PM)
Lol, it's amusing actually.

by Trapezium (12-12-2004 - 09:29 PM)
The parasites go silent

by devilchild01 (12-12-2004 - 09:29 PM)
yeah it is very

by Genocide Reaper (12-12-2004 - 09:33 PM)
I'm sure you all loved it.. Thank you, thank you for your praises and compliments..

by sarah10087 (12-13-2004 - 12:42 PM)
Yawn...same old same old

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