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Quite As Beautiful As Her
written by Morbid Angel10:18 PM 12/12/04| It's like I've emerged from a war but I'm not quite alive, dead girl walking with bleeding wrists and a knife. Been kicked to the floor so many times before, never once had the strength to fight back, wrists too shredded, heart too torn. Wounds eventually turn to scars and they fade into your skin, taking with them all the memories and the silence that they bring. Smiling is much harder when theres everything to cry for, living is much harder when theres so much more to die for. My river of words runs dry and my soul becomes so weak, can't even write away the pain anymore it's got that deep. So I'll let my secrets fade away into my arms, get locked inside the depths of my many broken scars. I'm trying to protect you from the shattered image you'll see, I don't want to break your vision of the perfect me. I'll never be her, I'll never be quite as beautiful as her. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Genocide Reaper (12-12-2004 - 10:20 PM)
| I love it. *kisses ass then bites it* ;) Just cause I can. |
by no-name (12-12-2004 - 10:22 PM)
by Morbid Angel (12-12-2004 - 10:24 PM)
| You can do whatever you want with my almost dead body Geno. |
by blackroses (12-12-2004 - 10:25 PM)
| Whoa thats really good! I aplaud your amazing talent my love! |
by Genocide Reaper (12-12-2004 - 10:34 PM)
| Sweetheart, if I did whatever I wanted to your near lifeless body, it would be like breathing the breath of life into your acheing soul. ;) Ressurection. |
by MorningStar (12-12-2004 - 10:37 PM)
| *sniff sniff*
I loved it.. |
by Morbid Angel (12-12-2004 - 10:41 PM)
| Sarah, if you happen to read this, then I hope you see the talent that these people have seen in my words. This is what makes me great. The ability to leave people speachless every now and again. It's not just me being big headed, just read these peoples words and weep. |
by sarah10087 (12-13-2004 - 09:25 PM)
| What is the fuss about...that was crap!! NO STRUCTURE!! NO FLOW!! JUST PARAPHRASES!! lol |
by Morbid Angel (12-14-2004 - 12:13 AM)
| I hate you, but I don't want a war with you. I said my final words, I didn't promise it was over, but I said what I had to say. You're just reapeating yourself over and over again, and I don't care. And it appears that nobody else cares either. |
by sarah10087 (12-14-2004 - 09:57 AM)
| lol..........im repeating myself, there seem to be a three ppl echo. |
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