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another day
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk10:28 PM 12/12/04Yet another problem, have another fight.
Another time im wrong
another time you're right.
Another tear falls down, for a reason that's unknown.
Another sad-filled moment,
another second alone.
Another hurtful time,
another night to pray.
Another reason to die,
because it's another day. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
the reasons life sucks, add up to everyday of my life.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by (anonymous) (12-13-2004 - 04:56 AM)
| nice poem. keep writing
~morbidlove10287
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by Cut_Wrist_Risk (12-15-2004 - 03:26 AM)
| I'd really appreciate it if some of you guys could please leave some comments, so I know how im doing. Thanks! -Cass |
by Trapezium (12-19-2004 - 12:49 PM)
| It's different to your others, and the difference stands out. You managed to keep the flow smooth throughout and your words are unexplainably beautiful. Keep them coming. |
by (anonymous) (1-1-2005 - 10:42 PM)
| this poem is the shit i defently can realte to it .. one day is hard enough so y does there have to be more ... if ud like to comment on that u can email me at dumbluv@aol.com |
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