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figure this out....
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk05:58 AM 12/13/04My father's leaving, my brother is too.
I am losing everyone, and it all started with you.
You told me you loved me, then left me here to rot.
I cut myself hiding the emotional pain, but now I can't stop.
It's more addicting then ciggerets, but makes you more confused.
And the more confused it makes me, the more addicting I am to you.
It seems as If I've had a hex put on me ever since you left.
My dad's dying, im watching him take his final breaths.
My brother has moved on, and forgotten about his former life.
He has his own son, and now perhaps a wife.
School's makin everything worse, cause I just can't do it.
Plus no one is really here, tellin me I'll get through it.
My mom doesn't notice im here, no matter what i do.
She doesn't even understand what im going through.
Then I have you to deal with, the person I can't live without.
I know that I love you, and there's no doubt.
But the feelings I have I wish they'd go away.
Cause this shyt's gettin old, living everyday.
Hoping I won't wake up in the morning, knowing there's no reason for my heart to beat.
Though I just suck it up, mange to stand on my feet.
Then there's you, the person I can't live with out.
This is all cause of you, I can't figure this out. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
How your love, your only love, leaves you and it ruins your entire life.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Cut_Wrist_Risk (12-13-2004 - 06:01 AM)
| PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTS AND READ MY OTHER POEMS.
Much appreciated,
Cassy |
by endless_suffering (12-13-2004 - 06:41 AM)
| I liked it, I can't say I know how you feel because I've never had an only love, I have had ppl who I liked ALOT but yeah
nicce poem |
by Trapezium (12-19-2004 - 12:47 PM)
| I can relate a lot, not 100% but I can relate. It's a nasty feeling, and you expressed it very clearly with your intricate words. All of your poetry is amazing, it's a good read and people can relate. Well done. |
by Genocide Reaper (12-19-2004 - 08:11 PM)
| Seems like agony and anger fuel you.. Very beautiful. |
by (anonymous) (1-18-2005 - 05:02 AM)
| krazy shyt i tell ya -mary |
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