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Making No Sense
written by psycho_bunny06:52 AM 12/13/04Surounded by this darkness,
trying to break free,
smuthered with this reality,
hating life,
getting worse every night,
missing you,
coming slowly unstitched,
my minds on the blits,
I don't think I can be fixed.
Because I'm young I'm shuved aside,
given no respect,
their breaking my pride,
throwing me away,
turning my dreams into their way.
The only person who ever understands me is no where in sight,
so now I'm alone every night,
I hide from the light,
wishing for a break in the clouds,
only finding rain,
coldness and pain.
I don't hold hate for my family,
their great thats quite true,
but sometimes I feel,
that this just isn't real,
they don't really know me,
they think that they do,
their love for me is unstable,
but I take it with much care.
Two states is whats between us,
distance is cruel,
but I am still loving you,
after all we have been through.
My mind is clouded,
my reality is twisted,
but I know two things...
One that I'm crying,
and two its because your not here. |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This poem seemed a little confusing to me so if you want I'll tell you what I was trying to say, I wrote it when I was feeling pretty angry and emotional so thats probably why it doesn't make much sense.
I was basicly just writing what I felt... Angry at my family for not understanding me and missing the only person who does understand, my boyfriend.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by endless_suffering (12-13-2004 - 07:01 AM)
| Yeha I know how you feel because my best friend David is liveing in like colorado and I am in hawaii so yeah it is really hard and he understands....I know how you feel |
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