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» Poem: When I'm With You (a love poem)
When I'm With You (a love poem)
written by trulybroken57
08:50 AM 12/13/04
When I'm with you,
Suddenly everything
Is ok.
You make me feel
Like I'm wanted.
Without you
I am nothing,
Like an angel
With broken wings.
But in your arms
I feel like
I can soar
Away from all my problems.
When I'm with you
I can be myself
And you don't care
When I say
Something stupid.
With you I feel
Like I'm whole,
I'll never be
Lonely again.
I am so
Lucky to have
You in my life,
A flicker of light
In all this darkness.
When I'm with you
I am calmed
And I am
Truly happy


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i know that sumtimes it might not seem like you mean that much to me. here's proof that u r my world

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» Comments / Feedback
by Tel (3-19-2005 - 09:55 PM)
im going throught that rite now.:)

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