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Little lost girl
written by Genocide Reaper10:58 PM 12/13/04| One of these days you are gonna learn, that your persistent attitude is a waste of time on me. You can't make me feel bad, or try and make me sad. I'm the epitimy of apathy, you will just find yourself surrounded by misery. Learn the word respect, its best to take all of those useless statements, and retract. For this War, shall end with me on top. Because my psychotic mind, it never stops. The Demon inside is breatheing hard, just looking for a target, and it wants to rip out your heart. You talk down to me, like you're something special, when push comes to shove, you'd rather be with your mother, all warm and nessled. We all know your weak enough to cry, we all know what it is you spread, its lies. That which you call skin you shed, is just another falsehood for everyones eyes. You speak so much, you lose yourself in your own pretense, you claim that your poetry is the shit, that its intense. When all I hear when I read it is, a lost little girl, crying for attention. Remember, Iv already called you out on your miss guided preception. Just another crying child, left out in the wild, with the Wolves and Tigers. Welcome to the Jungle, its rough out here, you might run across a few cold hearted snakes. So beware, when you reach out to take a hand, it could be your very last choice. |
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Poor kid. I pity you.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by devilchild01 (12-13-2004 - 11:35 PM)
| cool but ive said that a lot. im not going to make your head any bigger then it already is. you are great at writing poetry but maybe you should give others the chance of the lime light |
by Morbid Angel (12-14-2004 - 12:05 AM)
| Devilchild01, I am yet to meet somebody who could out-write this guy, not only in quantity but quality. Giving someone else the limelight would only be out of sympathy, because he deserves it most. |
by sarah10087 (12-14-2004 - 09:00 AM)
| "You speak so much, you lose yourself in your own pretense"--me?? i think thats oyu, so ur poem is just how you see yourself, a lost crying little girl...go back to mummy, im sure her cunt will have you back even if no-one elses will. |
by Genocide Reaper (12-14-2004 - 01:02 PM)
| Kid stop trying. You can't bring me down, you are just some little whiney kid. I bet you don't even know why in our Republic.. Yes, its a Republic in America, not a Democracy. Thats why they say. "the Republic for which it stands." They don't say Democracy.. In any event, I'm sure you don't understand why its a two party system.. Let me explain. To keep the people seperated, thus lowering chances of a Revolution. |
by sarah10087 (12-14-2004 - 03:06 PM)
| Ohh, your american...that explains it all now, it all bcomes clear.....i can completely understand why your so thick now. And also why you think ur the centre of the earths gravity. It explains a lot |
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