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TheMostMisanthropicSongIHvEvaWriten
written by sarah1008703:24 PM 12/14/04What the fuck are you like having a baby?
An innocent sweet young cuddly baby.
Into this world
Of greed and violence, death and misery
Just wait til 20yrs time when your kid is growing up
Fuck, things will really be fun then
An extenuation to ur ego, does it satisfy ur pride,
give a meaning to ur existance
Its the worst fucking crime.
That i can think of
What the fuck are you like, getting pregnant
An affliction i agree, can happen accidentaly
If it does you have my deepest sympathy,
But a pre planned conception
Demands mandatory intervention
Kill those fuckers in the womb
there enough of us here and theres no more room.
What the fuck are you like, even existing
Mankind the all destroyer non-creater
A sucking leach since the very 1st day that you were conceived.
The world would be a better place without us parasite,
raping everything in sight
Use your head and do whats right,
kill yourself help save the life
Of that starving 3rd world child,
no more trees left to clean your hole,
theres far more needy can have your dole
Your not so important, why cant you see
Just try to learn a little, humility
with a rope around you neck
Or a bullet in ur face
Will make this world a much better place
And leave just me To sit and sing on my own
I Think i have a few more years left to go.
I could sit and write these songs about, about, i can play these songs about.........**bang** |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (12-16-2004 - 05:54 PM)
| "It's not a poem if it hasn't been proofread a few times, it's just a draft" This isn't a poem or a song, it's a draft. Surely you'd realise a simple typo like that if you were so "talented" |
by sarah10087 (12-16-2004 - 08:19 PM)
| I never proof read my poetry, i just write what im thinking and post....it doesnt need to be edited....its just what i want to say, if i chnge it, its no longer what i originally wanted to say. |
by Trapezium (12-16-2004 - 09:38 PM)
| Your poetry isn't poetry then. Simple as that. It's just drafts. |
by sarah10087 (12-16-2004 - 10:19 PM)
| It is poetry, its just not perfect, reflecting myself cos i know im not perfect, unlike you who likes to think you are the model human being! Therefore, if they are my thoughts and i am not perfect, then my poetry can never be perfect...maybe you should think along the same lines. |
by Trapezium (12-17-2004 - 04:51 PM)
| No no, you don't understand. It is not poetry, it cannot be poetry. Your idea of a "poem" is completely misconcepted. Nothing is perfect, foolish child. You think you know enough about me to call me arrogant, yet you make the most ridiculous assumption of me thinking I'm perfect. For a start, nothing's perfect. For seconds I KNOW I'm better than no one else. I've told you this already, yet your ignorance is ridiculous. Why would I think along the lines of a girl that hasn't even reached adulthood, is calling 30 year olds 13, and doesn't know a thing about poetry, despite her apparantly studying English literature in A lvevels? |
by sarah10087 (12-19-2004 - 12:48 AM)
| A 30yr old man, couped on a computer, a recluse, perhaps you should read mattwhatever's poem on Nigel...I see the simularity...if i knew you, I'd pity you. Your closed rules that stick closely to the line are reminiscent of man who has nothing to live by but "the book". |
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