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Love or obsession?
written by sarah1008709:27 PM 12/14/04I crave your touch once more,
I long for the feeling i had before
I want those soft hands over me
I need to be at peace
I cant rest with you far away
I wont sleep without you another day
I have to have your love again
So i no longer have to live in vain
I cant have what I wish to seek.
What i want to say i can no longer speak.
Im dying surrounded by despair.
My hearts in pain beyond compare
Cos i want what i cannot obtain
Until you return I will never be sain
I have to have you near me
Without these things i cannot be. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by mattwhatever (12-15-2004 - 08:25 AM)
| At least your being honest about how u feel about him now! |
by sarah10087 (12-15-2004 - 09:51 AM)
| I dunno.. . . i really thought that was all over, then this coame out, maybe its not how i feel now, but how i felt b4. |
by Trapezium (12-16-2004 - 05:52 PM)
| Seemingly random stanza placing, showing no form of structure. |
by sarah10087 (12-16-2004 - 10:15 PM)
| Stanzas seemingly appointed as to where i want them to show where a change occurs in sentiment or feeling. |
by Trapezium (12-17-2004 - 04:47 PM)
| You still haven't told me what "sain" is. |
by sarah10087 (12-19-2004 - 12:45 AM)
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