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Contradictions
written by sarah1008712:43 PM 12/15/04Today is the day this all breaks down
The story's going to be fragmented now.
Your argument is weak and you know how
Your contradictory paraphrases are no use
When it comes to intelligence and abuse
So listen here you sad recluse
Your perception of anarchy is over prescribed
Teens brought up with conflictions and lies
Beleive anarchy is about killing those in ties
But no. Death is not a major part
Of an anarchists brocken heart
But a minor set back, present from the start
Think. Liberation of one and liberation of another
Killing is an eternal prison sentence that one must suffer.
Contradiction of which you seem to be a lover
Life, we only get one shot,
Kill another and thats their lot,
No more time for them to bleed
No more time for them on their knees
They just remain still, until the worms arrive
Their just doing their job trying to survive.
At the expense of a corpse left all alone
But the memory of death will haunt you at home
Could you imagine the nightmares you'd endure
For the sake of killing a fellow whore
Dying is the chains that you resist,
When you talk of death as if its bliss,
Are you really thinking it or just saying to be cool?
Cos to me, your just an arrogant fool |
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I know where this is aime, you know where this is aimed, so why dont you take note.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (12-17-2004 - 04:46 PM)
| Arrogance has nothing to do with self-worth. Actually, one can make such assumptions as poetry comes from the heart and the soul. If you read some poems then you can see what that person is like. I did call you arrogant on account of your comments and replies to comments. You seem to think you're everything and you try putting fully grown adults down by calling them 13 year olds when you're only 17 yourself! You've barely entered the world of work and you tell fully grown men to see the world! How hypocritical can a person be? Do you know the meaning of arrgoance, because again your words speak otherwise. You wouldn't murder me if you were my next door neighbour, you wouldn't have the guts to commit such a crime. |
by sarah10087 (12-19-2004 - 12:41 AM)
| Haha. I couldn't kill you if you were next door to me because I'm not a callous bitch. I care about other people. All this talk of murder with chainsaws to me is very childish. Death should not be glorified, and people who kill should not be immortalised |
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