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» Poem: does anyone care?
does anyone care?
written by trulybroken57
10:37 PM 12/16/04
no one understands,
what does it matter?
you don't care
at all.
can you hear me?
feel me scream?
you tear me up,
you break me down,
make me feel
so small.
i am so
lost between these
screams.
you don't care
about me,
you just see
my hollow eyes
and the hatred
that lies behind.
i scream for you
but,
you don't hear me,
i feel so small


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» Comments / Feedback
by _acceptable_loss_ (12-16-2004 - 10:55 PM)
good poem

by (anonymous) (12-17-2004 - 12:06 AM)
great poem I love it

by (anonymous) (12-17-2004 - 12:06 AM)
great poem I love it

by somethingcorporate (12-29-2004 - 01:35 AM)
this isn't about me, is it? because i do care about you. why do you think i cut myself? i guess i don't really show it though... : (

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