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I'm just living too die
written by suicide_penguin09:29 AM 12/17/04There once was a girl,
So innocent and so kind
Until she changed one day,
Hurtful words mutilated her mind
She no longer liked herself,
Or anyone around
The once innocent, sweet girl,
Was no where to be found
Her arms were always cut,
Her mind was filled with hate
Everyone wanted to help,
Before it was too late
But no one wanted to be the first,
To help the lost little girl
So instead they just watched,
As she disappeared from her world
So she continued to suffer,
Continued to bleed
And along with all of this,
She started taking weed
Food became another enemy,
Her life was a living hell
But she still kept her mouth shut
There wasn’t a soul she could tell
Because she didn’t want to be saved,
It wasn’t something she’d need
So she lived her life in misery,
And continued to bleed
Then it all ended one day,
Along with her life
But now she was happy,
With no need for her knife
Her pain finally ended,
She was finally free
And now all these people,
Would finally see
What it was like,
To live in her world
Always lonely,That lost little girl
I know how she felt,
And I’d like to know why
We continue living,
If we’re just living to die? |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by psycho_bunny (12-17-2004 - 09:52 AM)
| That was awesome! I bow to your great poem writing skills =) *Bows*
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by dark_soul_666 (12-17-2004 - 10:09 AM)
| that poem is fucking awesome you took the feelings right out of me |
by 2deo (12-17-2004 - 01:28 PM)
| i LOVED it...omg..awesome poem....i cant describe it...just fucking awesome!!!! |
by Jamie666 (1-30-2005 - 04:47 PM)
| fucking great! Really just fucking fantastic. Lol I dno how else too descrie it. |
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