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» Poem: I SEE what you fail to understand
I SEE what you fail to understand
written by sarah10087
05:12 PM 12/17/04
You may think he's a creep, just another jack the lad.
But I've seen him inside and there's more to him than that.
He does not just take his own desire
He asks politely and appleases with fire.
To me he's perfect in the most unperfect ways,
How i wish it could return to those easy days.
He's grotesque, yet so radiant.
Obediant yet ever defiant
Phlegmatic yet incandescent
Fragrent, yet like bug repellent.
You'll never see what i see,
So dont try to criticise me.
I may be blind to his callous black hole
And the way he crushed my once lively soul
But I can forgive my eradication
By his own dictation,
Because he is him, and I am me.
I cannot change recent history
After whats been said and done,
I still beleive he is the ONE.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I'm sorry matt.

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by sarah10087 (2-19-2005 - 06:28 PM)
and i was right. 2 weeks ago i got back with him and were solid. He is the one.

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