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When I Am Silent
written by lost_and_forgotten03:13 AM 12/18/04Will I be remembered
When I am silent?
Who will sing my song?
Will those I love remember me
Dancing barefoot in the grass?
When I am silent
Who will count the colors of the dawn?
Who will touch the first night's star?
Who will remember my dreams?
When I am silent
Who will hum my tune?
Who will cry my name?
Will I be missed
When I am silent?
When I am silent
Who will sing my song?
Will those I love remember me
Watching clouds go by?
When I am silent,
Silent,
Who will cry for me?
Who will cry?
~*~Kirsten*Ashley~*~ |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by EternalConceal (12-18-2004 - 03:19 AM)
| I love how you used teh repetition. Its really gets the points aacross. I loce the poems! To bad I hate life |
by lost_and_forgotten (12-18-2004 - 03:33 AM)
| thank you :)! ...its okay i hate life too most of the time...im always here for ya :) |
by (anonymous) (12-18-2004 - 06:38 AM)
| i think that is a cool poem.i really like it. thnx |
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