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Tell me you'll stay. (sequal)
written by Cut_Wrist_Risk09:55 AM 12/19/04Don't tell me to leave, so I'll tell you to stay.
When you're gone so is this feeling, I can't let you walk away.
No matter what you do, you always make me smile.
Wether I'm around you all day, or for just a short while.
What would be worth dreaming of, if I slept all night without you?
What's the point in waking up, if my day can't be spent with you?
Answer my questions, meet my needs.
I am so deep in this, I can't see when I'm acting conceived.
Please give me a red light if this is just to much.
Turn it back to green quickly, cause im deperate for your love.
I've been waiting for so long im dying inside.
I am reaching out to you, to help me come alive.
My arms still reachable as I stand here and I wait.
Will you bring me back to life? Tell me that you'll stay. |
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Sequal to don't tell me you're leavin. Please leave comments...much appreciated.-Cass [ View Cut_Wrist_Risk's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ] This Poem has been viewed 342 times
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» Comments / Feedback | by Trapezium (12-19-2004 - 12:42 PM)
I really, really like this. Well done. |
by Demonic_Aftermath (12-19-2004 - 06:02 PM)
This is REALLY good...this is the exact way i feel about my boyfriend Zack...good work... :) |
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