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» Poem: It Hurts
It Hurts
written by sarah10087
06:44 PM 12/20/04
It hurts dad, when you can't afford to feed the family.
It hurts dad, that you're no longer filled with glee.
It hurts dad when you're so drunk you cannot see.
It hurts the most dad, when you turn your back on me.

It hurts dad, when you leave me alone at night.
It hurts dad, that your wallet is taught and tight
It hurts dad when you give me an awful fright,
It hurts the most dad, when you nd me fight

It hurts dad, that you're so unhappy you want to flee
It hurts dad, that you and me dont speak.
It hurts dad when you're so drunk you cannot see
It hurts the most dad, when you choose her over me.


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» Comments / Feedback
by Trapezium (12-20-2004 - 06:59 PM)
And it hurts even more when that stuff's already happened, you haven't seen him for well over 10 years then one day he walks right past your house.

by mattwhatever (12-20-2004 - 07:00 PM)
Sarah apprieciate the relationship you and him have! Im jelouse my dad may not be tight but were no where near as close as u and him r! and were never going to be!

by sarah10087 (12-20-2004 - 07:08 PM)
you dont understand tho, the fatc that we were once close makes it all the more harder.

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