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» Poem: RaZoR Whispers
RaZoR Whispers
written by blackened_rose
05:39 AM 12/21/04
The gentle reminders
The feeling of pain
The blood rushing
I've got nothing to gain
The words carved
Into my endless pain
The signs that are there
Stay like a stain
Words of death
Words of unforgotten
Words like Hell
Words that are outspoken
Sign of the cross
Engraved in my wrist
To forever remind me
Of the ending twist
Blood is spilling
For I cut more and more
Wounds are here
And blood spills on the floor
Buddles of dark red
Soaking into the wood
Another word carved
For me it should
Remind me it will
Of lifes attack
For again
It stabbed me in the back
This time the word is home
For this I have none
The world is cold
Hate is seen a ton
I'm getting sleepy
For I wonder why this is
Blood is running
For death it is
I cut to deep
For this time I see
That pain is an additcion
And is killing me
Blood runs out of me
Just like my strength
Life runs short
But death, twice the length
So here I end
With something less
Words carved on end
For this I confess
I didn't mean to go this far
Life just isn't fair
In the never ending darkness
Is where I will forever stare


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» Comments / Feedback
by 4got_to_4get (12-21-2004 - 06:51 AM)
it's very good and emotional. keep up the good work. by the way i also like your user name. --Danielle

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